Aw, don't be so dismissive of yourself. Your help was invaluable last time, and anyway I'm just passing it around to see if anyone can help me come up with a way to fix the ending.
I originally posted it online here (http://writers-island.livejournal.com/5677.html) when it was first written. If you want to take a look, you can read it there, and then drop me an e-mail with any thoughts about making the ending less abrupt.
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12/2/10 04:39 (UTC)I originally posted it online here (http://writers-island.livejournal.com/5677.html) when it was first written. If you want to take a look, you can read it there, and then drop me an e-mail with any thoughts about making the ending less abrupt.
Thanks, hon.