Help Needed

[melayneseahawk]

(Damn LJ Mobile ate this post before. Let's try it again from a real computer.)

I am in desperate need of an alpha reader for a piece of Star Trek Reboot fic I'm working on for trekreversebang. I know what my basic plot is going to be, and I've got 2k words on the page, but I need help with transitions and making the emotional undercurrents subtle enough.

You don't need to know anything about canon except a basic grasp of the main characters. It's an AU, with an Andromeda-like android that is part of the Enterprise's systems. The fic will be low-rated Kirk/android!Enterprise, unrequited Spock/Kirk, so I can't just ask the usual suspects at kirkspock.

Help? Please? E-mail me or comment if you think you can help. melayneseahawk[at]gmail[dot]com

Comments

[allandaros.livejournal.com]

So wait, Kirk finally gets to get it on with the Enterprise? That's...er. :P (Also, if fraternization is against regs, this has gotta be so far against them that it broke the warp barrier...)

I can read through it, sure.

[melayneseahawk.livejournal.com]

No, he does not get it on with the ship, because [spoilers spoilers spoilery spoilers]. I'll add you to the GoogleDoc, you can read what's already on the page, and then I can blather at you about my issues.

Thanks!

[(Anonymous)]

Hey! =) I'm your artist for the Star Trek Reverse Big Bang ... I'm delighted to hear that you've taken this story on. I just wanted to throw out that if you want to evolve it into a Kirk/Spock story at the end, I'll be tickled pink over it. Whatever works for you.

*hugs*
-B.