highrise living for a joke like me

This one is nearer to my heart than I think many of you know. I visited New Zealand, including Christchurch, when I was in high school, and absolutely fell in love with the country. The landscape is gorgeous. The people are friendly and kind. I certainly can't contribute financially right now, but I can do this:


Mel's fanfic auction

If you can contribute, I suggest you head on over and check out the many wonderful offerings people have already put up. Bidding begins tomorrow, 1 March.

So, I need to hit someone up for speedy beta services for my help_chile fic, but it's complicated.

First, it's Reboot Jim Kirk/Spock, rather than Jack/Daniel, and I don't know how many of you all are Trekkies. Admittedly, you wouldn't actually need to know the canon to help. As long as you know who these folks are in the broadest sense you'd be fine, since it's story pacing issues not characterization that I'm having trouble with.

Second would be the plot. ( cut for the uninterested or really easily squicked )

If you're familiar with the Next Gen episode with Data's daughter Lal, you'll know the beginning of this plot. The request was for Starfleet to reassign Spock to be a research subject after discovery of thing under the cut, and then is kidnapped to a lab when he tries to resign, and of course Jim comes after him. I'm just having pacing issues between "We're reassigning you" "No!" and the rescue.

(I can even trim the draft so you don't have to read the purposefully-badsex at the beginning if you want.)

Any takers? I'm begging here. I'll even write you a drabble in your fandom, pairing, and prompt of choice when I'm done.

Finished my help_haiti fic, with the wonderful help of princessofg. You can find it here:

Someone to Watch Over Me | PG | 1809 words | complete